not everything i say has to make sense or have a name for that matter
i judged myself too harshly
by you
you never said a word
i know
i said enough to fill
your silences
didn’t know you had not
said anything
did you?
not to worry
no big deal
it wasn’t your fault
honestly
it’s not you
it’s me
good thing you
don’t know who
you are
else you would
read this
and think me
dangerous
(Copyright (c) 2004 Kristi Swadley. Originally appeared in Ygdrasil, December 2004.)
by you
you never said a word
i know
i said enough to fill
your silences
didn’t know you had not
said anything
did you?
not to worry
no big deal
it wasn’t your fault
honestly
it’s not you
it’s me
good thing you
don’t know who
you are
else you would
read this
and think me
dangerous
(Copyright (c) 2004 Kristi Swadley. Originally appeared in Ygdrasil, December 2004.)
11 Comments:
Wow, that's a powerful write! So far, this is my favourite Kristi poem.
yes that has a bite
the title pulled me right in
it woke me up
Thanks, Aurora. :)
Good. It was intended to bite. Thanks, Donna. :)
The thunder of silence! Excellent poem!
Yes, yes, yes.
Thank you, Pat. I appreciate your words.
Michael, all I can do is smile. Thank you.
Its always a joy to run across a bit of poetry while blogging alone and I am glad that I came across your poetry.
kristie, love this one. haven't spoken to you in a while. i'm glad to see you writing!
cheers, harry
Hi New to the site I love it
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